This thread is for considering various ideas for editing the current prototype of Guidance Withdrawal. Here are some edits I strongly consider:
- Insert more emotion and tone into the telepathic communication of the characters
- More detailed character description
- Less use of full character names, and instead using the first name almost all of the time.
- Rework the characterization of Adano as person who doesn’t pay much attention to his environment. Such a description is not very appropriate for a highly intelligent and attentive person.