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Planned editing for Guidance Withdrawal


(Michael Hrenka) #1

This thread is for considering various ideas for editing the current prototype of Guidance Withdrawal. Here are some edits I strongly consider:

  • Insert more emotion and tone into the telepathic communication of the characters
  • More detailed character description
  • Less use of full character names, and instead using the first name almost all of the time.
  • Rework the characterization of Adano as person who doesn’t pay much attention to his environment. Such a description is not very appropriate for a highly intelligent and attentive person.